You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter.
1. Introduce yourself
2. Describe your plans for the party
3. invite your neighbour to come
Dear Martin,
I am neenu, your new neighbour, residing in flat no: 9.I am writing this letter to invite you to the house-warming party that I am going to conduct.
I moved to this house last Friday, from my hometown angamaly. I am here working as an engineer in a company nearby. As I had to go to my office these days, i could not able to meet you through this week.
So, I would like to hold a function in my home on Wednesday to get together all my new neighbours. I am planning to have a blessing of this flat by our parish priest, and later evening dinner is arranged along with dj and barbeque. I am Worried about the sound of the music, as it may disturb the residents here. I would like to say sorry in advance, if it noise from the function irritates you. I will surely pay attention to make the sound of dj within limit.
I would also like you to come to the function, as this is an opportunity to meet all our fellow residents all together.
I look forward for your presence in the party. I hope the noise will not make any issues to your family.
Yours sincerely,
neenu.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...r new neighbour, residing in flat no: 9.I am writing this letter to invite you to...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng party that I am going to conduct. I moved to this house last Friday, from m...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...last Friday, from my hometown angamaly. I am here working as an engineer in a com...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...As I had to go to my office these days, i could not able to meet you through this...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., as it may disturb the residents here. I would like to say sorry in advance, if ...
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Line 7, column 358, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'noises'?
Suggestion: noises
...uld like to say sorry in advance, if it noise from the function irritates you. I will...
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Line 7, column 397, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... noise from the function irritates you. I will surely pay attention to make the s...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o make the sound of dj within limit. I would also like you to come to the func...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l our fellow residents all together. I look forward for your presence in the p...
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Line 11, column 48, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...forward for your presence in the party. I hope the noise will not make any issues...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27751196172 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43882126842 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588516746411 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9341329601 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7692307692 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253968776453 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899839044072 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840661584195 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130079726237 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959814403405 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.