You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.
Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about the discrepancies found in my credit card bill statement. I am maintaining a savings account at your bank branch and have also availed of the service of MasterCard.
I live in Canada and it shows that the card transaction been done in Morocco for the purchase of mobile phones, AirPods, and few clothing accessories. This is not done by me as I can not be present in 2 different countries at one time. Even. I did not receive any notification or e-mail regarding the purchases.
According to me, there might be a system error at the generation of the bill. I would request you to, kindly rectify the system errors and resend me the new statement. I could provide you the documents required to verify the false purchase not done by me.
Please give this matter your immediate attention.
Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Krutika Barot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in my name Akash Rathore, 3 months ago. I received your statement and have found ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nses shown which are not done by me. I live in Canada and it shows that the ca...
^
Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... accessories. This is not done by me and I have opted for the service from the ba...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ts use, which I did not receive any. According to me, there might be a system error or fraud...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...there might be a system error or fraud. If its fraud please inform the cybercrime....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 709.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57419354839 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25043873627 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.722580645161 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0591869466 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231104404283 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774297741895 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754545347781 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934321468562 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460804970875 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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