You have lost your ID card. Write a letter to director of student services.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Manpreet Singh, a student of second year having roll number 11420, who studied Bachelor of Technology in your college, writing this letter to request you to provide me new identification card as I have lost existing one.
Last Friday, when I was travelling back to home from college, I misplaced or lost my identification card somewhere. Since then my life is messed up. On weekend, I was not able visit cinema as there was no more discount being offered without student ID card. In addition to it, I have been paying huge charges to transportation from last two days because subsidiary rates required student ID card, as well as not able to withdraw money from bank without it. Not only this, next month examination are coming and I have to visit Library very often and it is obvious, I would not get any entry there in the absence of my student identification proof.
I would be very grateful to you, if you can reissue new ID card to me. If there are any charges required from my end for new ID card then do let me know, I am ready to pay it.
Looking forward for quick and positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Manpreet Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... lost my identification card somewhere. Since then my life is messed up. On weekend, ...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (ID) must be used with a third-person verb: 'cards'.
Suggestion: cards
...teful to you, if you can reissue new ID card to me. If there are any charges require...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, so, then, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62019230769 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64934383274 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2103268758 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32300000729 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107900864208 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886109976911 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168913397903 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117782493351 0.0580467560999 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.