You have a problem with a neighbor.
In your letter,
Describe the problem.
Say long it has been a problem.
Explain what action you want the neighbor to take.
Dear Mr. Patel,
I am writing this letter to inform you that, for a while, I am hearing a noisy TV sound from your house in the middle of the night every day. I would like you to consider it seriously as I am working in the early morning.
It was started almost last Friday night. Around 11:30 pm I was watching tv with my girlfriend and suddenly I heard a loud noise around my apartment. So I rushed outside to look out where it comes from. Then after a couple of minutes, it was silent like a pin drop. But the next day it happened again, and now it's a daily noisy sound from your apartment. As I am working on the work floor in my company and most of my day I spent standing about 6-7 hours a day. So to be a more efficient employee at work, I must need to acquire at least 7 hours of sleep. Because of the loud music from your house I would not able to get and it has affected a lot on my performance at work. And also my girlfriend is studying at school and has morning classes, so it also affected her study too.
I would suggest you keep it low as possible so our neighborhood would be quieter at night time and everyone would get good sleep. Else you can use headphones instead of tv speaker to listen at a loud volume. As I heard the same complaint about this particular problem from many of our neighbors too. I would highly appreciate your cooperation and consideration of my imbalanced life at home and work cause of this issue.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...tter to inform you that, for a while, I am hearing a noisy TV sound from your house in the...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...the next day it happened again, and now its a daily noisy sound from your apartment...
^^^
Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... tv speaker to listen at a loud volume. As I heard the same complaint about this p...
^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cause of this issue. Yours sincerely, XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 283.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21908127208 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42714260786 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554770318021 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0018381856 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.625 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103039016026 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034463501312 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407807474413 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806781892748 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044217675978 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.