Write about an environmental problem and suggest solutions?
In this contemporary era, we are using non-renewable resources and putting a huge burden on the environment. Deterioration is a plethora of issue all around the world, however, with proper planning and support from the government, we could make our eco-system environmentally friendly for all of us.
Carbon dioxide, above all of the others, the prime part of environmental pollution. Exhaust fume from vehicles and many industries, directly pollute our surrounding, which as a result creates breathing problem for many human being. The polluted air adversely affects the ozone layer, if it breaks down then direct sunlight would burn our skin and also causes many skin related diseases. A survey has been done by an Indian magazine, for instance, pollution has been proliferated by 10% in just one decade. Our ecological system has been damaged by different pollution.
There are mainly two best ways to control it. To begin with, we should start using public transportation over private vehicles. Cars and motorbikes are exhausting polluted air to the environment and could be controlled by using public transportation service. The government should make it more convenient and reliable for everyone with a minimum fare ticket. To add to it, increase the use of renewable resources such as solar power, wind power, tidal energy, and nuclear energy are green sources of energy without affecting our environment. In the year 2020, Canada has started using energy generated from renewable resources and increased by 2% at the end of the year. Individuals and states would work together to preserve our eco-system from pollution.
In conclusion, although pollution is one of the biggest threats to the environment, with proper measures and strict rules we can save our planet earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...for all of us. Carbon dioxide, above all of the others, the prime part of environmental...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30281690141 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94235600115 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630281690141 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1142581378 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0720227975858 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0230179406046 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254987414867 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478633701442 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189264905445 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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