You have recently moved to a different house Write a letter to an English speaking friend In your letter Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Jone,
Hopefully, you are the wellbeing life with your family. I am writing to tell you that I already moved in to the new place for 2 weeks that this place we used to go and inspect last 3 months to buy this one.
I had moved the new place because my mother and father will move in together with my partner next month, therefore my spacious room was not enough to live together. You still remember my family because they just remembered you during travelling in Bangkok for my wedding party. They missed you so much.
This house is fantastic because it is located at the Camberwell Park as well as the new recreation centre is free for everyone. The council is very concern about the environmental area, so there are many trees planted as a fence around us.
We would like to invite you to come and join our grand opening house. It will be held on next week. My father and mother need to see so much. Please kindly reply me. I will send a notice letter to you soon.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Noppong Ampai

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng from you. Yours faithfully, Noppong Ampai
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, therefore, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39487179487 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25538438218 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661538461538 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9108973161 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2142857143 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9285714286 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210532905083 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663072859601 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469250422095 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101155826822 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375987419909 0.0580467560999 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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