You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friendIn your letter:Explain why you changed jobsDescribe your new jobTell him/her your other news

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You have recently started work in a new company.

Write a letter to an English speaking friend

In your letter:

Explain why you changed jobs

Describe your new job

Tell him/her your other news

Dear Mike,

I'm just writing to let you know that I got a new job in a different company.

As you already know my previous job as an Accountant was stressful and very demanding, as I always get to the office before 7am and leave after 10pm that was why I decided to change my work. Also I wanted to gain new experience in a different field of work.

I'm a marketing personnel officer at my new workplace and I'm in charge of developing new product and advertising it to the public. I also make presentations on our products at conferences and seminars within and outside the country. My job now is very attractive and it comes with a huge annual salary and a 30 days paid vacation.

Would you like to know what I've been up to? Well I got a new girlfriend and we've been going out for the past two years. She's a very beautiful young lady who works with the Central Bank within the district. She will be around to welcome you on your next visit.

All the best

Andy

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38043478261 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49098089561 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.700142784 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2727272727 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195265618555 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645908130342 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545059709564 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122461805229 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457608384205 0.0580467560999 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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