You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend
In your letter:
Explain why you changed jobs
Describe your new job
Tell him/her your other news
Dear Jay,
Hope everything goes well, it has been six months since we last meet in Toronto. I am writing this letter to let you know that I have changed my job for two weeks, and it makes me excited.
Do you remember that I did a part-time job as an office administration when I was in school this winter? Before I graduated, I have looked for other jobs that meet my study background. Finally, I get a sales job from the car dealership which is called Auto Solution.
Now I am a full-time sales representative. As you know, my advantage is communicating with people, and my major in college is Profesional Sales Management. This job is perfectly adopted by my personality and study background. To achieve a high performance of sales, I meet the numbers of customers daily. To myself, it is a good experience because I could build a relationship with them during my selling.
As you know, I like a dog, with this full-time job, I could make more income, and I decide to adopt a pet dog. There will be a new member in my home.
it was a wonderful vacation half years ago with you, looking forward to your reply.
Thanks,
Hao,
Kind Regards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ere will be a new member in my home. it was a wonderful vacation half years ago...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55023923445 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82584396372 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641148325359 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2068887968 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.9285714286 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128937965513 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039888761237 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501930412417 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807211593288 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396985010443 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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