You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during holidays. You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,
*Introduce yourself
*Explain what experience and special skills you have
*Explain why you are interested in the job.
Dear sir/ma'am,
I am writing to apply for the post vacant at your City Museum shop, as per the details furnished in the daily mail, New York Times. I am 27 years old and I live in Dalton Apartments, which is near your museum shop. As for my studies, I am a sophomore at Western University, New York and my stream of study is history.
I have prior experience in dealing with artwork, as my grandfather owns an art business in California. I have often helped him with various errands elated to the business. Besides, I happen to run a small online business of crafts and paintings which sells different local artists works for a small fee. I have received informal training on how to handle expensive art pieces from my grandfather.
I would love to work in your museum because I can learn a lot about famous creations from reputable artists from all around the globe. Also, many of the works displayed at your museum seems to have a lot of historic value which will be helpful to my studies.
I look forward to hearing from you in the future.
Yours faithfully,
Depa
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-10-23 | gayathri subarshan | 73 | view |
| 2019-10-23 | gayathri subarshan | 56 | view |
| 2018-11-26 | Dpk | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62886597938 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55291538824 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623711340206 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4369715065 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6363636364 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203812275262 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700960171156 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361518525826 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105953696501 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305331518721 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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