Some people become famous at young age. Is it good thing or bad thing?
With the help of modern communication platforms such as social medias and the internet, many youngsters are gaining wide acceptance and enormous popularity along with huge fan base. This has aided many children to rise to celebrity status even when they are very young. Though the financial stability it offers is beneficial to these young stars, the many challenges associated with the stardom is deleterious to the overall well-being of these young idols.
First of all, celebrities are often offered high remuneration compared to other professions because of the massive influence they hold among general public. This helps them to lead a luxurious lifestyle free of financial troubles, even after they have grown up, to an extent. A few examples of such stars include Emma Watson and Miley Cyrus, who have risen to fame at a very young age. They have managed to maintain a solid career.
However, fame is not always a desirable and positive factor in young children's life. For example, not all child stars are capable of coping with the extensive stress and pressure which comes together with popularity. They become addicted to drugs and alcohol to overcome these psychological problems. Moreover, serious drug addiction and alcoholism might cost them their entire career. For example, Lindsay Lohan, who was famous as a child actor ruined her entire career over drug addiction and alcoholism.
In conclusion, though there are many children rising to fame before they are able to make rational decisions, precautions are necessary, so that they will not get hurt when facing the challenges posed by the idol status. Thus, this essay states that caution should be practiced when dealing with children rising to fame and not to focus on money alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 142, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...f the massive influence they hold among general public. This helps them to lead a luxurious li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14685314685 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57065067676 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63986013986 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5403051129 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0687798374521 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250142796491 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334937732763 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0385089629138 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223347823897 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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