you have stayed in a hotel a couple of days for a business meeting and left a few personal belongings there. Write a letter to the manager of hotel to asking for help. Explain when you stayed in the hotel, What did you leave there? what would you like the manager to do about it.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Mandeep Kaur. I was guest at your hotel , where i attended a business meeting . I am writing to you as i forgot my laptop in your hotel room.
Let me explain my booking more in details, I booked my room in your hotel for two days on dated 7 June and I leave your place 8 June at night. I stayed in room number 210 of your renowned hotel.
When I have reached home , I realised that my laptop left in hotel room . It is 15 inched black Dell laptop and there is a sticker of Barbie on left corner of keyboard which stick my niece on it. I often use it, so you can find there are some letters of keyboard are missing on it.
Could you ship it to me? I have valuable data on it, which I do not save any other device. Moreover, I have one more business get to gather on this Sunday, So I will be very thankful if i get it before that day. I will pay all include charges . You can send me your bank details as well.
I will apricate your prompt action.
Best Regards,
Yours Sincerely
Mandeep Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Mandeep Kaur. I was guest at your hotel , where i attended a business meeting . I...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Kaur. I was guest at your hotel , where i attended a business meeting . I am writ...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...el , where i attended a business meeting . I am writing to you as i forgot my lapt...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...siness meeting . I am writing to you as i forgot my laptop in your hotel room. ...
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...owned hotel. When I have reached home , I realised that my laptop left in hotel...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...alised that my laptop left in hotel room . It is 15 inched black Dell laptop and t...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s Sunday, So I will be very thankful if i get it before that day. I will pay all ...
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Line 9, column 243, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...that day. I will pay all include charges . You can send me your bank details as we...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion. Best Regards, Yours Sincerely Mandeep Kaur
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.12254901961 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07791061083 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622549019608 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2392886738 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0666666667 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46666666667 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238463168331 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793878358899 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690251727248 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121634004528 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664371632563 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.02 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.