Discuss your opinion about how modernism can affect our health. What can the government do to overcome such circumstances.
There is no iota of doubt that modernization impact on the health of the people in the reverse way due to work long hours and more use of fast food. Government should take some steps to mitigate this problem. In this essay, I will discuss both sides like in what way modernism affect well-being of masses and how can address this problem.
In the present scenario, people work long hours to meet their target to save their job which affect wellness of individuals. Contemporary masses become more work-holic and ignore health. In addition, due to hectic schedule, common worker have less time to cook healthy and nutritional food at home so they prefer processed food and fast food which are easily available at every corner of the world at low price. Such food have high fat and preservatives so these kind of eatable things are unhealthy. Hence, working long hours and hectic schedule people eat what they have and it affect on health in opposite way.
To solve this health issue, government need to take some strict step as healthy citizens help to grow the economy of country.First and foremost, high authorities should be fixed working hours and implement this rule in every organisation and office. It gives worker mentally and physical rest which help increase the level of well-being of lay men. Secondly, government must impose more tax on fast food and processed food which become expensive and people think before buying it. Last but not least, media ought to help government in this area through advertisement to show that how can a person live healthy.
In conclusion, in this essay we discussed in what way health is impacted by modernism and government have to take some decision to face this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9180887372 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53937758859 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559726962457 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9781689994 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17315102346 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673790388924 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620136224655 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124675712318 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498075894545 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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