You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,• describe the si

Dear Sir or madam,

I am Jessica living in the room no 4a. Through this letter, I request you to resolve the issues faced by me in the room.

The huge noise from near by blocks, disturbs my sleep, tranquility and hence I am unable to concentrate on the studies. Also, the leakage of the water from first floor restroom falls in our room. We had already complained to local Warden and there is no revert from them. Moreover, computer is under repair and I am unable to study.

Most importantly, room mates does not maintain their place clean and often quarrel with other room friends. If possible, provide me with single room or shift me to my friends room. Her room mate is moving out for marriage next week.

Considering the above issues, I request you to resolve my issues at earliest.

Your Swift action is highly appreciated.

Thanking you,
Yours sincerely
Jessica

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
... me in the room. The huge noise from near by blocks, disturbs my sleep, tranquility...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... The huge noise from near by blocks, disturbs my sleep, tranquility and hence...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42127698188 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688311688312 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2574659458 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.4166666667 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180728085539 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620083444484 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646815618918 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897282507194 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783915224955 0.0580467560999 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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