You need a translation of a document in to different language and you have a friend who speaks that language.
Explain what the document is and why you need a translation?
Explain why this is urgent and important for yoy?
Ask your Friend if and when he/she will be able to hepl you?
Dear Thomas
Its been ages since we have seen one another.I am fine here with the grace of almighty god and hope for the same for you. As you already know that three months before I have applied for canada immigration in fradral process.
I am delighted to tell you that last week I got selection certificate and a letter in franch in which they want to enquire my concern about working in Quebec. As you know that i donot know anything about franch now i am in a rock and hard place. I have to submit all the replies and related quarries in franchwhich is not my cup of tea. Fortunately, you are good enough in this language.
Quebec is very prominent state of canada and their native language is france therefore, its essential to submit docment in that language. Popularity of this state is gaining ground among the society as its companies nourish their employees with massive outlay. Eventually, this job will play a phenomenal role to uplift my living standard. The last date of submission is 3 march so I have only 5 days.
I am wondering of you can help me. I know your exams will be finished after 2 days. Perhaps it would be a good idea for me to contact you on coming saturday or tell me the time which suits you as per your convenience.
Now, I am looking forward to hearing from you and don't forget to pay my regard to your family.
With warm wishes
Urvashi ghai
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 258 350
No. of Characters: 1095 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.008 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.244 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.362 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 71 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 47 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.176 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.466 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.176 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.677 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.165 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 8 5
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...een ages since we have seen one another.I am fine here with the grace of almighty...
^
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... am fine here with the grace of almighty god and hope for the same for you. As y...
^^
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou already know that three months before I have applied for canada immigration i...
^^
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e I have applied for canada immigration in fradral process. I am delighted t...
^^
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... am delighted to tell you that last week I got selection certificate and a letter...
^^
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in which they want to enquire my concern about working in Quebec. As you know tha...
^^
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... i donot know anything about franch now i am in a rock and hard place. I have to ...
^
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... place. I have to submit all the replies and related quarries in franchwhich is ...
^^
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it all the replies and related quarries in franchwhich is not my cup of tea. For...
^^
Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which is not my cup of tea. Fortunately, you are good enough in this language. ...
^^
Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f tea. Fortunately, you are good enough in this language. Quebec is very pro...
^^
Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s language. Quebec is very prominent state of canada and their native languag...
^^
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir native language is france therefore, its essential to submit docment in that...
^^
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uage is france therefore, its essential to submit docment in that language. Popu...
^^
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mit docment in that language. Popularity of this state is gaining ground among th...
^^
Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...round among the society as its companies nourish their employees with massive out...
^^
Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ployees with massive outlay. Eventually, this job will play a phenomenal role to...
^^
Line 7, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tually, this job will play a phenomenal role to uplift my living standard. The l...
^^
Line 7, column 396, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... date of submission is 3 march so I have only 5 days. I am wondering of you c...
^^
Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p me. I know your exams will be finished after 2 days. Perhaps it would be a goo...
^^
Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll be finished after 2 days. Perhaps it would be a good idea for me to contact y...
^^
Line 11, column 51, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...looking forward to hearing from you and dont forget to pay my regard to your family....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4609375 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43858899952 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4816413033 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1333333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 2.54639175258 864% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192818414143 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651549702597 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049350174324 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107613432206 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351971345048 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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