You’re working overseas in an international company. You are leaving the country in an emergency. Write a letter to your friends explaining the situation.
In the letter, you should
– apologise for leaving like this
– explain what happened
– tell them what you’re going to miss about working with them
Dear John and Maria,
I'm sorry for informing both of you about my plans to rush back to my home country on such short notice. I wanted to meet you before leaving but due to my scheduled itinerary and to clear all the dues, I was unable to see you both on my last working day. Please accept my apologies for that.
My father is hospitalized and is in serious condition. My mother is worried about him and crying since then. As I'm the only child of my parents, It's my responsibility to support my family at this critical time. I 've to take care of my parents, therefore, I've decided to quit my job here and to shift with my parents. I hope that you'll understand my situation.
Since now I'm writing, I must tell you both that I've learnt a lot by working with one of the intellectual minds like you. You both have supported and guided me throughout my career there in Germany. I'll miss the brainstorming sessions, tea breaks and all the funny moments we had at work. Overall, It was a great working experience with you both.
Once again sorry and be in touch.
Best wishes,
Ell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear John and Maria, Im sorry for informing both of you about m...
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Suggestion: I'm
...ied about him and crying since then. As Im the only child of my parents, Its my re...
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Line 9, column 146, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...en. As Im the only child of my parents, Its my responsibility to support my family ...
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Line 9, column 256, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... to take care of my parents, therefore, Ive decided to quit my job here and to shif...
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Line 9, column 330, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: you'll
...d to shift with my parents. I hope that youll understand my situation. Since now...
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Suggestion: I'm
...understand my situation. Since now Im writing, I must tell you both that Ive ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...w Im writing, I must tell you both that Ive learnt a lot by working with one of the...
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Line 13, column 199, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... throughout my career there in Germany. Ill miss the brainstorming sessions, tea br...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54455445545 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49729291724 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648514851485 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7774918935 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5714285714 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13715388771 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514852110727 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592054587544 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675756545006 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077736635406 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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