You recently attended a meeting at a hotel When you returned home you found you had left some important papers at the hotel Write a letter to the manage of the hotel In your letter Say where you think you left the papers Explain why they are so important

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manage of the hotel. In your letter.
• Say where you think you left the papers.
• Explain why they are so important.
• Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Nguyen Van Tuan. I was an attendee of a meeting held in your hotel yesterday afternoon. I am writing to you to ask you a favor. Please allow me to elaborate on the details of my situation.
Yesterday afternoon, after coming home, I recognized that I left a document in the meeting room. I could not return to the room because I had to fly to Ho Chi Minh city on a prearranged schedule right away. Thus, please ask your staff, who clear the “Van Mieu” meeting room, to find a yellow notebook. It is mine. I placed it on the table of the first seat, from left to right, in the second line of chairs. The notebook contains my personal information, which is crucial for me, and my birth certificate is also clamped inside it. The notebook is easy to identify because it is pretty differentiated from other disposable papers of meeting. I would be grateful if you could collect my objects and keep them until I come back to Hanoi to meet you next week.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Tuan

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41538461538 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5606335508 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651282051282 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8417724598 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9285714286 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238448907385 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747609888973 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949358491133 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177794670876 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340867546881 0.0580467560999 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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