Your are working for a international company. You have seen a advertisement for a training course which is useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• Describe training course you want to do.
• Explain what the company could do to help you.
• Say how the course will be useful for you job
Dear Mr. Hao,
I hope this mail finds you in good health. I am writing to you regarding a suggestion which would be better for our work. Please allow me to elaborate on the details.
I have come across an advertisement about a short training course named “Increasing acknowledgment of the new tender law.” This course will help attendees understand the content of the new tender law, which has been issued, and know how to apply it in the bids. The organizer also gives a certificate at the end of the course as usual. I believe that it is essential because we can not prepare the tender documents without comprehension of the latest legal updates. Moreover, a certificate of the new tender law is also a compulsory requirement for persons in charge of the implementation phase of the contract. It is time to get the certifications on the new tender law, preparing for the upcoming contracts.
Thus, I suggest me and three staff of my team will join this training class. It will be held in Horizon Hotel on Monday next week. I attached the request application in this email with further information filled. I would appreciate it if you could approve then forward the application to the relevant personnel to let us join the course in time.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Thanh Tung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nel to let us join the course in time. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75652173913 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8777222667 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617391304348 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.879330076 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1428571429 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197838554584 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579936347423 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052531668533 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926414934054 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351652517818 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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