You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so important. Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear Madam,
thank you for letting me a chance to present issues. The reason I am writing to you is that I would prefer to call for your help.
Actually, my name is Ren and I am 24 years old. Previously, I have a opportunity to come your hotel with my mother, I am so glad about it. Unfortunately, due to my carelessness, I forgot some important papers at the hotel that I realized until coming home. I assume that I forgot in a conference because I could have talked with my friend at this time, thus I did not pay attention to anything besides me
I purely confused about this mistake. Such an urgent papers that I have to disturb to you.If I do not have these papers, I can not study abroad, this brings huge influences on me. I definitely hope that you could find these papers for me, I would try to come this hotel and give some sincere thanks to you
I am looking forward to receiving your response, best wishes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d I am 24 years old. Previously, I have a opportunity to come your hotel with my ...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'paper'?
Suggestion: paper
...used about this mistake. Such an urgent papers that I have to disturb to you.If I do n...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...nt papers that I have to disturb to you.If I do not have these papers, I can not s...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...receiving your response, best wishes
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, if, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52338612801 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594285714286 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6900816235 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.375 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252751332224 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110721580982 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724297378177 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132899833649 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892729414892 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.