You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say
– Thank them for supporting you.
– Describe how you spend your time.
– Explain about your recovery process.
Dear john,
I am good at my place and i hope you are doing well. I wanted to writing you back in order to thank you for sending me precious souvenirs and gifts and to make me feel relaxed by asking me about my long fractured leg.
Firstly, i am extremely thankful to you for giving me a hand in tough days as i am going through a worse situation as it is really difficult for me put a step out as i got a big injury a few days ago. Although i am recovering gradually, i find it quiet hard to move without wheel chair. Also, doctor suggested me to take bed rest and take required medication for getting well soon. Anyway i am delight that you are handling all important projects of business on behalf of me and i promise you to come back at workplace as soon as i get recovered and assist you in business.
I spend whole day at home and some times i really feel irritated and disturbed. However, as you know my elder brother is working from home with a communication company. Therefore, i aid him in his office operations and It does not only give me internal piece of mind but also provides a chance to take a new experience and i can use my leisure time in a precious manner.
Physician has recommended me to take bed rest for a month and told me that it will take a month to recover my injury and i really thankful to you.
Yours sincerely,
Sarbjeet kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ar john, I am good at my place and i hope you are doing well. I wanted to wr...
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...doing well. I wanted to writing you back in order to thank you for sending me pre...
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...out my long fractured leg. Firstly, i am extremely thankful to you for giving...
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...u for giving me a hand in tough days as i am going through a worse situation as i...
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...ally difficult for me put a step out as i got a big injury a few days ago. Althou...
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...t a big injury a few days ago. Although i am recovering gradually, i find it quie...
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...go. Although i am recovering gradually, i find it quiet hard to move without whee...
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...edication for getting well soon. Anyway i am delight that you are handling all im...
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...rojects of business on behalf of me and i promise you to come back at workplace a...
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...ou to come back at workplace as soon as i get recovered and assist you in busines...
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...lder brother is working from home with a communication company. Therefore, i aid ...
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..., i aid him in his office operations and It does not only give me internal piece ...
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...s a chance to take a new experience and i can use my leisure time in a precious m...
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...xperience and i can use my leisure time in a precious manner. Physician has recommended me to t...
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...time in a precious manner. Physician has recommended me to take bed rest for ...
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...ly thankful to you. Yours sincerely, Sarbjeet kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22433460076 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51670818012 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1886829237 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235634171589 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933054121648 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600479276057 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1332978175 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488918001394 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.