You recently completed a course in college and liked the lessons given by a particular teacher. Write a letter him/her and introduce yourself. When and where did you take the course? Why did you like those lessons?
Dear Professor John,
I believe your health is good. I am Shiv Verma from Product designing course, a batch of 2017-19. I have finished my course a week back and thought to write a thank you letter for your guidance throughout the course.
While pursuing Product designing I have learned a lot of subjects and enjoyed them thoroughly. Among all these subjects Fundamentals of Design was my favorite subject which was taken by you. Basic design fundamentals like projections, two-dimensional and three-dimensional drawings, freehand drawing was very much of my interest. These lessons have helped me a lot during my final year project where I was designing a specific product for needy. The project was successful and it got funded by one of the companies of Toronto. Now, I am working full time as a Research Designer at my friend’s startup and I can feel that everyone is really happy with my work.
I hope you remember me and accept my appreciation. I wish to work under you again and seek your guidance for better advancement in my skills.
Yours Sincerely, Shiv
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Professor John, I believe your health is good. I am Shiv...
^^^
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...course a week back and thought to write a thank you letter for your guidance throughout...
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Line 4, column 546, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...companies of Toronto. Now, I am working full time as a Research Designer at my friend&apo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt in my skills. Yours Sincerely, Shiv
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93956043956 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99593674839 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5505869061 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9166666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109413042321 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402593814088 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492490083572 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532749739973 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474258008423 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.