You recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.
How important the licence is to you
Asking how he/she found it
Saying how you would love to thank him/her.
Dear Mr. Singh
I am highly grateful and obliged to you for sending my lost driving license to me back. I really appreciate your pro activeness and sincerity. I lost my all hopes to get my license back, and I was worried that I have to go through same ordeal again. As you know to get driving licence in Dubai is a one of the hardest task.
I had to apply for job, for which driving licence is obligatory and I was not able to apply for the same. Furthermore, as the deadline for applying job was 26th of June, there was no time for getting a new licence also. I lost my licence on last Sunday, as I was travelling back to my house from office,in office it was with me, I only noticed on that night when emptying my pant pockets to wash. So, I want to know that from where did you find my licence.
I want to thank you personally, kindly tell me when and where we cant meet. As, you have did a great favor to me and I will be able to apply before last date.
Thanking you
Yours sincerely,
Jagteshwar SIngh
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Comments
Erroneous content
Erroneous content
Answer of second question is no where
Worthless
Band score- 5.5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iate your pro activeness and sincerity. I lost my all hopes to get my license bac...
^
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...I have to go through same ordeal again. As you know to get driving licence in Duba...
^^
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e was no time for getting a new licence also. I lost my licence on last Sunday, as I...
^^^^
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
... travelling back to my house from office,in office it was with me, I only noticed o...
^^^
Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nally, kindly tell me when and where we cant meet. As, you have did a great favor to...
^^^^
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...en and where we cant meet. As, you have did a great favor to me and I will be able ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18181818182 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29544204417 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2463124636 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2727272727 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175374243925 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830464362753 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519590864632 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11780609727 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345605903847 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.