You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they like the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
• Say what the participants like about the hotel
• explain why they were unhappy about the food
• suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.
Dear Sir
I am one of the recent customers of your prestigious restaurant who organised a business get-together last Friday at your place. I am pending down this missive in connection with not only my best but also worst experiences while my visit.
There were about 20 colleagues with me from which most of the members were applauding the services provided by your staff as the area was spick and span with well educated and professional staff. Moreover, the way all the precautions were taken by keeping in mind the current pandemic scenario was commendable. On the contrary, all the participants of the meeting including me found the food atrocious as it looked stale as all the vegetables and fruits very soggy. In addition to that, it was tasteless, without any spices which ruined the mood of everyone.
To make it a better place, I want to suggest you that you should appoint someone who can keep a keen eye on food department as if the groceries and fresh or not; even about the right amount of spices to make a dish laudable.
I hope you will look into this matter which certainly will make a world of difference to your hotel's status.
Yours faithfully
Arshdeep Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'also the worst'.
Suggestion: also the worst
...in connection with not only my best but also worst experiences while my visit. There were...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to your hotels status. Yours faithfully Arshdeep Kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71980676329 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65789181506 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6741425665 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.555555556 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208914877067 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719496759747 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354818883843 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101495280911 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389009052751 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.