You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points:
1) What is the article about?
2) What is the error?
3) What you expect an editor to do?
Dear Sir/Madam,
There was an article published on biography of well know industrialist Mr. James Thomas in New Your Times. I am writing this letter to highlight a couple of misleading information presented in this article.
The article was precisely published on 1st May 2018. It provided a detailed insight on the life of Mr. James and his journey to build a network of hotels across the country. It also narrated his constant struggle with bureaucracy and the continuous attempt of his enemies to defame him.
Mr. James has been availing my legal services since many decades and I know him personally as well as professionally thoroughly. An incident mentioned in the article where he slapped a lady in public is fake and fabricated by the media. Moreover, the composition sates that he is a school dropout, whereas, the truth is, Mr. James completed his masters from California university in the year 1970.
Being an editor of this highly reputed national newspaper, I request you to kindly look into this matter urgently. On behalf of Mr. James, I request you to publish an apology note along with the correct facts and information.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-08 | abanoubEmil | 78 | view |
| 2019-09-01 | aycorek | 87 | view |
- Some people say that government should decide what subjects a student can study, while others believe that students should decide what they want to study. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 77
- Fewer and fewer young people are choosing to become teachers Why do young people not want to become teachers How could this be changed 73
- Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community? 56
- You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving, what type of rooms you would like and ask them how much the weekend will cost 89
- Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly services information tasks Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, XYZ
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0099009901 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81496484102 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653465346535 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9335385359 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166700063863 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572827532703 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453879618074 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968387960892 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461085906203 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.