You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very god.
You want to tell him how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer. In your letter
say how you feel about his performance
give details of your musical activities
explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
Dear Mr. Michel,
I would like to congratulate you on your feast of ears performance yesterday night at Rock on club in New Jersey. I completely enjoyed your rhythmic tunes and learnt a lot of musical techniques from it.
To begin with, I am a musical student and also want to be an electrifying singer like you. However, my I am in the lack of some musical techniques which is necessary in a good singer. It would be a kind gesture if you teach me such skills and techniques so that I also have a bright musical carrier.
As I am a huge fan of yours, I started learning guitar at a very tender age. Perhaps, I have some difficulty in playing ‘G-strings’ technique in guitar. I hope to have a simple way out from you to play this technique. In addition, with it, I would like you to provide me a vocal cleaning technique so that my singing also gets better.
I am eagerly waiting for your next concert and your precious reply.
Yours sincerely,
Sunny Mehta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: YESTERDAY_NIGHT[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'last night' is used.
Suggestion: last night
...e you on your feast of ears performance yesterday night at Rock on club in New Jersey. I comple...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47191011236 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73299449907 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.229055944 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3636363636 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234971928438 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869391786095 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517941261784 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139120519734 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363134875067 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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