You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr. Franklin,
I am Alex Turner and I am writing this letter to you in concern with the non-bearable furniture of your Cleveland Street apartment which you have rented me last week.
Firstly, when you rented me this apartment you mentioned in the lease that its fully furnished and all the furniture is newly developed. However, when we begin our living here we noticed that the cupboard in the bedroom is well-looking from outside but broken from inside. In addition, the bed of room on right is full of termites and no one can sleep on it.
Secondly, the curtain holder is loose and that's why when we were sleeping all the time curtain falls down and the light from the street disturbs our sleep. I can take legal actions against you pertaining fraud with us but, I do not want any legal authorities until you solve this matter soon so that, I need you to repair or change all these things as soon as possible otherwise, I am tied up to take actions on you as I have the lease agreement with me.
To conclude, I hope you understand our problems and solve it as soon as possible. Otherwise, I am tied up to take legal actions on you. I am waiting for your immediate response.
Yours sincerely,
Alex Turner
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...condly, the curtain holder is loose and thats why when we were sleeping all the time ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53603603604 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47566272601 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3116420728 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.7 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224429903011 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885238844124 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752670614465 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145586737805 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752864514389 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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