You recently went shopping at the local supermarket. When you got home and noticed your bill, you found that you had been charged for items you did not purchase.
Write a letter to the supermarket manager explaining what has happened. Tell the manager how you feel about the error and tell the manager what you would like him/her to do about it.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to raise my concern with regards to the invoice about the items I purchased from your store
Let me explain in more detail, I visited your local supermarket for purchasing some products for my home. Since I was busy packing the items I did not go through the bill which was generated by the cashier and paid an amount of Rs 6000 through my Axis Bank Debit Card. However, after reaching home I checked the bill thoroughly, and to my surprise I realised that I have been charged additionally for a Cheese packet and a Deodorant which I have not purchased and was not in the bag too.
I as a customer felt cheated as the clerk charged me additional money because I was not alert at the time of checkout.
I would like you take my matter into consideration and take necessary actions. Furthermore, kindly reverse the extra price charged to me in my bank account as soon as possible. I am attaching the copy of invoice for your reference; my invoice number is AN6655 dated 27TH July 2019. I would also recommend you to provide proper training to you staff so that they are able to provide satisfactory services.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut the items I purchased from your store Let me explain in more detail, I visited...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ble to provide satisfactory services. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64253393665 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62872951699 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619909502262 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4713321114 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223332194336 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791354708856 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535221363789 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104885397324 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510902790671 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.