You recently went shopping at the local supermarket. When you got home and noticed your bill, you found that you had been charged for items you did not purchase.
Write a letter to the supermarket manager explaining what has happened. Tell the manager how you feel about the error and tell the manager what you would like him/her to do about it.
Write at least 150 words.
Last week I went to the mall for shopping. I went to the make up shop. I bought a lot of makeup and some other stuff. I done my shopping, and I paid the bill when I got home and I noticed my bill. Igot surprised to see my reciept. I have been charged for extra items which I did not perched. So dear manager you should improve your staff. Iam very surprise to see this mistake. How you guys can extra charge. If your staff will repeat these error eventually you guys are getting to close down. I will suggest you place keep check and balance on your staff. In last ,I get the solution that I will come tomorrow on your shop and buy more stuff to keep the balances equal. Its effort for me to come again. So,I am sending you this letter if you like my solution then conform me otherwise pay my money back. I would be appreciate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun makeup seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of makeups'.
Suggestion: a lot of makeups
...g. I went to the make up shop. I bought a lot of makeup and some other stuff. I done my shoppin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t a lot of makeup and some other stuff. I done my shopping, and I paid the bill w...
^
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'did'?
Suggestion: did
...a lot of makeup and some other stuff. I done my shopping, and I paid the bill when I...
^^^^
Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'perch'
Suggestion: perch
...charged for extra items which I did not perched. So dear manager you should improve you...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 410, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mistake. How you guys can extra charge. If your staff will repeat these error even...
^^
Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this error' or 'these errors'?
Suggestion: this error; these errors
...extra charge. If your staff will repeat these error eventually you guys are getting to clos...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 565, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...check and balance on your staff. In last ,I get the solution that I will come tomo...
^^
Line 1, column 707, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ual. Its effort for me to come again. So,I am sending you this letter if you like ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 665.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.07975460123 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09287894324 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668711656442 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0239400039 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 44.3333333333 76.5299724578 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8666666667 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3356890404 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945780000995 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856584732786 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3356890404 0.12726935374 264% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.2 8.37731958763 38% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.2 8.71597938144 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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