Dear Sir/ Ma'am,
Greetings of the day ! Through this letter I want to draw your urgent attention towards the mismanagement of parking area in front of City Bank, where I am working as a teller. As my home is not far away from City Bank, so I always prefer to ride my bicycle in order to to reach amy workplace, and to park my bicycle I use the the parking area own and run by your company.
However, the functioning of parking was very excellent till the new car park area was introduced very near to the bicycle parking lane, which adversely affects the safety of bicycle Riders because some car drivers drives recklessly in the park. Moreover, most car drivers does not care about the space of bicycle lanes and park their cars which does not leave any space to us.
That being said, I humbly request you to look after the matter and provide us with enough parking space in order to park our bicycle safely as I already paid 6 month charges in advance
I am hoping that you will solve the issue at your earliest convenience. Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours truly,
Jacob Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Maam, Greetings of the day ! Through this lett...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ways prefer to ride my bicycle in order to to reach amy workplace, and to park my bic...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...workplace, and to park my bicycle I use the the parking area own and run by your compan...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...workplace, and to park my bicycle I use the the parking area own and run by your compan...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing you in anticipation. Yours truly, Jacob Brown
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56060606061 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34722321731 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.7270522215 44.8134815571 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 16.8248392259 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346876727591 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140012958398 0.0766984524023 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631674287068 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187049495564 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316831308754 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.