You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is Omer, I work for Global IT Company in Turkey. I am writing to this letter regarding seminar in Germany which was announced on internet. Some details are not specified on the advertisement such as the seminar’s dates, accommodation and costs.
I would like to know this specific information to attend this seminar.
Firstly, the commencement and finish date not specified on the announcement. Could you share me commencing and finishing of seminar and program schedule? I need to inform to company I work. The seminar’s date should not conflict with any date of project’s milestone or important meeting.
Secondly, regarding the accommodation and cost, will you arrange accommodation or not? Finally, what is the approximate cost? Also, I need to have information about payment method. I would prefer to use my international credit card for this seminar. Is it valid?
Thank you in advance. I am looking forward to hearing you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Omer Otcu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: Companies
... My name is Omer, I work for Global IT Company in Turkey. I am writing to this letter ...
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Line 6, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oject’s milestone or important meeting. Secondly, regarding the accommodation an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25925925926 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09557688627 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654320987654 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1784907997 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.25 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.125 16.8248392259 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413196303555 0.216113520407 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104218861457 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717943904232 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207269362226 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449804065808 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.75 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.