You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Lionti,
I am writing this letter to you to allow me to take short break from my work and to be precise it will be next 4 weeks off from the work.
As you are aware that my Masters in Marketing strategy is undergoing with oxford University, I am going to appear for my final exams from 25th September this month. I would like you to grant me 4 weeks leave starting from 10th September to 4th October in order to complete my assignments and prepare for final tests.
Let me assure you that all the work that is going to hamper due to my absence at work during this period, I will try to cover it up once I rejoin the office. If required, I will do extra shifts in the evening and ensure that all the necessary tasks lagging behind are aligned within a week’s time.
Once I acquire my masters in Marketing Strategy, it will also assist me in developing certain skills that are vital to conduct my role as senior sales manager. As a representative from the organization, it will not only have impregnable impression on our clients but also enhance my knowledge to crack deals in company’s favor.
Yours sincerely,
James
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47596153846 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54409612848 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610576923077 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8649013707 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.375 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217221326615 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922193750383 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05733917359 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126948973502 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065874250793 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.