You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have compl

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.

Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter

explain why you are writing

describe your circumstances

ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to let you know that I am interested in the computer course offered in your institute. I read about it recently in the local newspaper. While I possess the basic computing knowledge, I am entirely unable to apply because it's eligibility is only for people who have completed an elementary course. I hope you will consider my situation favorably.

Let me explain my situation. I am a mechanical engineering student without any formal degree in computers, however I have always had interest in coding and algorithms. The trouble is that the mandatory elementary course will commence after 3 months but my semester break will end prior to that.

Would you kindly check if any special exception could be made to enroll me in the course? As long as I get admission, I won't mind weekend classes.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Saba Azam

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, while, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89613535595 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.713333333333 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6789008566 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6363636364 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297769922828 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903909735378 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704707410262 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169496588251 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785074421632 0.0580467560999 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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