You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room.
Task: Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.
Hey Rob,
I am writing this letter to thank you for the assistance and support you provided me during my stay in Sydney. This has been the most exciting, memorable and mesmerizing trip of my lifetime. I am writing this letter also, because of the fact that unfortunately, I forgot my important document at your house in the room where I stayed.
Let me explain you the content, appearance, and significance of the file in detail. This file contains a mortgage application that I initiated in Sydney for one of my executive customers. It is a red color folder with black borders and must be in the topmost drawer of the exquisite cabinet placed in the corner of the room. I must mention that it contains highly sensitive details about my client who is purchasing a new house next week, and without this application, I would not be able to serve him which means an immense loss to my organization.
Can you be please courier this file to my India address as soon as possible, and I will inform you once I receive it? It would be great if you could also email me the tracking number when you ship it.
Looking forward to receiving the documents soon.
Best wishes,
Jon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...ifetime. I am writing this letter also, because of the fact that unfortunately, I forgot my important do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61611374408 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65089523926 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630331753555 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6429253193 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5454545455 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268228208813 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954277597524 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816674647636 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150466965515 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868934812325 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.