You want to improve your knowledge of a foreign language which can help you at work. Write a letter to a foreign language teacher and say
– Where did you hear about the teacher?
– Why do you want to learn a foreign language?
– Ask some questions about the course.
In this digital age, for more than 90% of families, parents and children have launched a "protracted war" without gunpowder smoke against restrictions on the use of electronic devices .Based on the about of report ,I have gotten the main idea of some experts .There is no absolute correlation between the limitation of device use and children’s well-being .we are supposed to pay more attention to what children are watching ,playing and reading and ensure that the content is high-quality ,age-appropriate and safe .Besides ,join them as much as possible .
Everything has its two sides . it is undeniable that this restriction of parents, in principle, is conducive to helping children balance their entertainment life and study. Obviously, learning is more important than the two .According to brewer’s view ,parents should join in with their kids rather than limit their media consumptions . With the participation of parents, in addition to controlling the time children use electronic products, it can also affect their way of thinking and make them gradually become self-discipline and self-control. children can also enhance their physical quality .
digital devices exist everywhere in our daily life and to a great extent ,we can’t avoid using them if we want to be successful to complete something .Moreover ,it is impossible for parents to limit their kid’s media consumption forever .As a result ,participating and keeping exposure safe are the best way to deal with the problem like this .
To sum up ,brewer’s view is brilliant and rational ,due to the children’s rebellious psychology ,I can’t agree more that we need to respect everyone when we are going to resolve contradictions .From where I stand ,as a college student ,actually we prefer to accept parent’s participation rather than be controlled by them .it is suggested that parents should adopt a rational and practical way to help children overcome their addiction to the Internet, rather than blindly restrict them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, as a result, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 937.175257732 182% => OK
No of words: 317.0 206.0 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38170347003 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13073670042 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 127.690721649 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605678233438 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 290.88556701 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 16.3608247423 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.245827724 44.8134815571 418% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.25 76.5299724578 279% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.625 16.8248392259 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.875 4.34317383033 296% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 2.54639175258 1571% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0357096921349 0.216113520407 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0171164050384 0.0766984524023 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00829946233343 0.0603063233224 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0236833550008 0.12726935374 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00286178667356 0.0580467560999 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 8.37731958763 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 70.7449484536 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 7.45979381443 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 8.71597938144 167% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 41.2886597938 220% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 8.62886597938 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 8.54432989691 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 8.15463917526 294% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.