You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or the company which supplied the equipment. In your letter :
Describe the problem with the equipment
Explain how this problem is affecting your work
Say what you want the shop or company to do
Hello Sir/Madam,
Myself is Raghav and I am living in greater kailash. I am writing here regarding the headphone that I purchased from your shop in month of November 2022. It has been only three months and left side of the speaker is not producing the sound and microphone is also malfunctioning.
I am working in an IT firm and as you know post pandemic we are following the hybrid working policy. Hence, I have to work from home for three days in a week, Thats is why headphones is an essential equipment for me, since it is working properly I am not being able to attend meetings properly some time I missed the hear important discussion and getting escalations from my manager due to this.
Here I would like you to please fix my headphone or replace it with new one. I am attaching orignal copy of bill with the letter.
Looking forward to see swift action from you.
Thanks.
Your Sincierly
Raghav
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...also malfunctioning. I am working in an IT firm and as you know post pandemic we a...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'firms'?
Suggestion: firms
...alfunctioning. I am working in an IT firm and as you know post pandemic we are fo...
^^^^
Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ork from home for three days in a week, Thats is why headphones is an essential equip...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'essential equipment'.
Suggestion: essential equipment
...s in a week, Thats is why headphones is an essential equipment for me, since it is working properly I ...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nd meetings properly some time I missed the hear important discussion and getting escala...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...ill with the letter. Looking forward to see swift action from you. Thanks. Your...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62195121951 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57911693035 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664634146341 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.2477389841 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2222222222 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20632327672 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760696817022 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420971729891 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10686405926 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434943530327 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.