You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
Describe the problem with the equipment
Explain how this problem is affecting your work
Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
This letter is to complain on the laptop that I bought from your good company last week. It is malfunctioned and the major problem is the keyboard which is not working correctly.
It often show the different alphabets from my typing command. For instance, when “A” key was pressed, the letter “S” was wrongly displayed. There are four more different keys such as “Space”, “I”, “O” and “U”, with similar issues. This defect disturbs my everyday job since the nature of my work includes a vast amount of report writing. Furthermore, this results the loss of man-hours and my company is warning for being not able to provide the necessary reports as per schedule.
As the follow-up action, I would expect to get a replacement unit as soon as possible to continue my work. It is not required to have the same specification as my unit and as far as it is able to type the correct words and generate reports, I am fine. In the meantime, I would expect my laptop receiving required servicing since it is still under warranty.
Thanks for your attention into this matter and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Mr. Yan Naung Aye
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shows'?
Suggestion: shows
...h is not working correctly. It often show the different alphabets from my typing ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, still, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00480769231 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02271586584 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639423076923 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8453188215 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156334891496 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063140598111 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586789425635 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118459754871 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878811323001 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.