Your child is going on a trip to another country for 3 days. School is looking for some parents who can join the trip and you decided to apply for the same. You are interested in going with trip. Write a letter to the head of the school and include:
• Why you want to join the team
• What you can do to assist
• Queries related to the trip.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My daughter attends your school and she informed me that you are looking for a long time volunteer to attend school trips. I am the mother of sashi; she is studying 4th class.
I thought since I have a long relation with school I would like myself forward. I previously worked as a teacher for 3years before my daughter was born. I would like to join the tour group because I have been to India several times and as your tour is to explore India; I can guide the students better.
Apart from helping as a guide, I can help to organise some activities among children. And also I am a certified first aid responder, so in an emergency situation I would able to provide basic first aid.
I would appreciate if you could share me the details of the tour and number students attending the tour. If you want discuss anything in particular you can contact me on .
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
sashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...th school I would like myself forward. I previously worked as a teacher for 3yea...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...for 3years before my daughter was born. I would like to join the tour group becau...
^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and number students attending the tour. If you want discuss anything in particular...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hing in particular you can contact me on . I look forward to hearing from you. Y...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, apart from, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52631578947 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49361000558 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643274853801 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3668675933 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3636363636 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186735190782 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672066036102 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054104545617 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100935793569 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456826869227 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.