Your daughter wants to study english at a language school in the town of weymouth next year. Write a letter to the school. In your letter
Ask for information about the courses
Explain that your daughter is interested in social events
Find out what accommodation is available.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to enquire about the English language course which is taught at your language school.
I am interested to admit my daughter for the course and would kindly request to please provide me the complete details of the course such as duration of the course,timings of the classes and complete fee details for academic year.Moreover,if you can let me know preciously at which month the classes would be starting such that i can tell my daughter to be prepared.
As my daughter was working with an organisation which help the under privilaged and local communities, she is quite fond of social events.I would also like to know,how often social events are organised in the school.
Lastly,if you can provide me the detail options of accommodation which is available in the school such that it would be easy for us to decided which option we need to prefer.
Awaiting your response at an earliest date.
Yours faithfully,
Smith Karl
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , timings
...he course such as duration of the course,timings of the classes and complete fee details...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
... complete fee details for academic year.Moreover,if you can let me know preciously at wh...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...e fee details for academic year.Moreover,if you can let me know preciously at which...
^^^
Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the classes would be starting such that i can tell my daughter to be prepared. ...
^
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ies, she is quite fond of social events.I would also like to know,how often socia...
^
Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , how
... social events.I would also like to know,how often social events are organised in th...
^^^^
Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...s are organised in the school. Lastly,if you can provide me the detail options o...
^^^
Line 11, column 27, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...to prefer. Awaiting your response at an earliest date. Yours faithfully, Sm...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96951219512 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77526118734 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.9981725 44.8134815571 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.833333333 76.5299724578 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268164333455 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144157546597 0.0766984524023 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934179827753 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153135455399 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113508068188 0.0580467560999 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 8.37731958763 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , timings
...he course such as duration of the course,timings of the classes and complete fee details...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
... complete fee details for academic year.Moreover,if you can let me know preciously at wh...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...e fee details for academic year.Moreover,if you can let me know preciously at which...
^^^
Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the classes would be starting such that i can tell my daughter to be prepared. ...
^
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ies, she is quite fond of social events.I would also like to know,how often socia...
^
Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , how
... social events.I would also like to know,how often social events are organised in th...
^^^^
Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...s are organised in the school. Lastly,if you can provide me the detail options o...
^^^
Line 11, column 27, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...to prefer. Awaiting your response at an earliest date. Yours faithfully, Sm...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96951219512 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77526118734 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.9981725 44.8134815571 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.833333333 76.5299724578 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268164333455 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144157546597 0.0766984524023 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934179827753 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153135455399 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113508068188 0.0580467560999 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 8.37731958763 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.