Some people feel that the media has the strongest impact on people’s lives.
Others feel that it is politicians who have the most control over the way people live.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that media has a significant effect on people's lives whilst others disagree and think it is the politicians who have more control over them. While the media impact by building a perception in the individual's mind, I believe that it is the legislators who basically control people's life by controlling the economy of the country.
On the one hand, it could be argued that media help in building a perception among the people. Those who support this notion, often say that media can control and impact the lives of people in many ways such that educating them about the current world trends. In addition, all the current and latest news of the world is given by the media to the people. For instance, a recent study conducted by the University of Mumbai states that in India the people thinking are mainly be influenced by using the media to win the election by the majority of the parties.
On the other hand, it is the politicians who control the economy of the country. To illustrate, a country is mainly judged by the economic conditions of it and the flow of the money will be in the hands of the politicians. Moreover, politicians are mainly responsible for the state of the country and the condition of the economy. For example, in a survey by Forbes magazines, they found out that all the decisions of the politicians impact the economy of the country and affecting the people in one or another way. Thus, politicians have paramount control over the way people live.
In conclusion, although media impacts certain people's lives it is the politicians who have all the control over the people's lives by controlling the economy of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7560137457 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63815934771 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432989690722 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0951925252 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403672916015 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172413339533 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149294191682 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308112751978 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104134826425 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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