Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
- Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre.
- Explain the why the centre is important for the local community.
- Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express grave concerns about the recent decision by local council to close ‘Latham Community Center’ for monetary reasons. Closure of the community center will deeply affect the neighborhood both physically and mentally.
To begin with, my family and friends extensively use the center for various activities. My husband and mother take Yoga lessons everyday at the community hall. Me and my friends use the sports facilities like Badminton and Swimming frequently.
In addition to that, the center is a favourite spot for locals to socialise. It acts as a breath of fresh air in our mundane lives.Children visit the centre regularly for sports and games. In fact it is one of the very few places that is safe for children to play freely. All of the above reasons have led to strong bonding between people and have subsequently created a safe neighbourhood.
Finally, if the council still goes ahead with the closure decision, it will be a great loss to the community. Adults will find it difficult to socialise, children will be deprived of a safe place to play and have fun together.
I sincerely request you to reconsider the decision. I look forward to hearing a positive outcome from the council.
Yours faithfully,
Deepika Sharma.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...My husband and mother take Yoga lessons everyday at the community hall. Me and my friend...
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Line 6, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Children
...reath of fresh air in our mundane lives.Children visit the centre regularly for sports a...
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Line 6, column 273, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...at is safe for children to play freely. All of the above reasons have led to strong bondin...
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Line 10, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t you to reconsider the decision. I look forward to hearing a positive outcome fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, still, in addition, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1214953271 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87104568238 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64953271028 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7310037242 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2857142857 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157405151586 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475767077642 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426290693256 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652918284186 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241210040337 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.