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Many people believe that the news coverage about celebrity is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
News about celebrity can always cause a sensation among public, and that is exactly why there is an increasing amount of celebrity’s news coverage on mass media. Those celebrities receive most of their attentions from the youngsters. However, those endless coverage often poses a threat to the healthy development of young people. I cannot agree more with this opinion.
First and foremost, celebrities are normal human being who would inevitably have shortcomings or even bad habits. When those obnoxious paparazzi dig out the skeleton in closet, they would rush to publicize without a second t...
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the adverse influences on the young has far exceeded good influence
the adverse influences on the young have far exceeded good influence
Sentence: The news report about celebrity, certainly, is not alway leading a negative impact.
Error: alway Suggestion: No alternate word
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