Convenience food will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what degree do you agree or disagree?
The fast pace of modern life brought in its wake the advent of convenience food. Unlike fast food, it saves the cooking time with posing much risk to our health. Therefore, it is said that the popularity of convenience food will eventually wipe out the traditional food and traditional cooking method. However, from my standpoint, this assumption cannot hold water.
The most convincing reason is that there a still a considerable group of people who stick to the traditional cuisine and cooking method. For those who regard cooking as a hobby, convenience food deprive them of the pleasure in the...
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The fast pace of modern life brought in its wake the advent of convenience food
The fast pace of modern life brought in its wake on the advent of convenience food
Sentence: For those who regard cooking as a hobby, convenience food deprive them of the pleasure in the cooking process.
Description: The fragment food deprive them is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace deprive with verb, past tense
Sentence: What's more, quite a lot business trisections re negotiated during dinner or lunch and surely those entrepreneurs would not chose to invite their important trading partners for convenience food.
Description: A negator is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to not and chose
Sentence: Besides the hardcore cooking likers, convenience food is not that popular among housewives and retired people who have enough time to prepare for meals.
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Sentence: What's more, quite a lot business trisections re negotiated during dinner or lunch and surely those entrepreneurs would not chose to invite their important trading partners for convenience food.
Error: trisections Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Different Words: 188 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.331 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.074 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.593 0.50
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