In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. Do you agree or disagree?
International companies have established a strong position in every nation’s commercial market. It is evident that they have suppressed the local, traditional competitors to a great extent. These multinational giants are being advertised by themselves substantially in mass media day-to-day. This makes them to indirectly control and attract the people towards their products. From my perspective, this soaring trend has disturbed the quality of life detrimentally.
Admittedly, in striking contrast to my point of view, some people argue that these corporates improved the quality of life in sev...
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Sentence: After using this particular product for a prolonged period, a common man gets affected by cancer and he or she avail treatment like chemotherapy, which is a trillion dollar industry especially owned by these corporates again.
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