Nowadays people are throwing away unnecessary things. Is it bad or not?
As we know technology is increasing day by day. The people who want to take the newest and the best ones are throwing away the objects which are old , for example phones computers etc .
Some people think that throwing away the objects which are old and take the newest and the best ones is good!! However we can see some people who think it is bad habit .
From point of my view throwing away the objects is not bad!
When we discuss about this issue firstly we see the bad sides of this issue. American people have this kind of habit. They are throwing the objects which are old. That is why China is buying all the rubbishes of America and they recycle them. There are lots of poisonous gasses in the objects which are throwing away now. As a result our atmosphere is getting more and more dirty.
Secondly, under the dirty atmosphere the people take an illness easily. And as a result is the world will be full of people who have taken the illness if the situation continuous as now.
From point of my view there are few better things of this issue. For example the people who throw away the objects are so fashionable. Just they throw away the old ones and they buy the new ones. Even they do not care about others lives.
Conclusion.......
I think this issue has more disadvantages. However for me the most dangerous one is air pollution. Humans play big role on polluting this essential resource. Air pollution may not be so dangerous but in long term it will have tremendous effect on the environment and health
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'kind of', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217821782178 0.247107183377 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.178217821782 0.155533422707 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0990099009901 0.0946595960268 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0660066006601 0.0501214627716 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0561056105611 0.0437548338989 128% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0891089108911 0.122226691241 73% => OK
Participles: 0.03300330033 0.0403226058552 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35249541846 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.003300330033 0.0326793684256 10% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.115511551155 0.0861772015684 134% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.013201320132 0.021408717616 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.03300330033 0.011925033212 277% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1549.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 280.0 316.048096192 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53214285714 6.12580529183 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.257142857143 0.374742101984 69% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.164285714286 0.28420135186 58% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1 0.203846283523 49% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0785714285714 0.137316102897 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35249541846 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.037074148 80% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.56093040696 89% => OK
Word variations: 48.5697300338 60.7387585426 80% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.7272727273 20.7743622355 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.353290654 49.517814964 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4090909091 127.492653851 55% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7272727273 20.7743622355 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.590909090909 0.814263465372 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38877755511 159% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 3.99599198397 400% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 29.1558441558 49.1944974215 59% => OK
Elegance: 1.13186813187 1.69124875643 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234560020739 0.332605444948 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110375958132 0.102741220458 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.139031845784 0.0668466124924 208% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.524351832082 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.201609148502 0.148594505496 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853410108389 0.134430193775 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069720294689 0.0742795772207 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.280320808846 0.324371583561 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.102406604833 0.0638462369009 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156838180196 0.228012699653 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737415612238 0.058150111329 127% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9