4. Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years. Why do you think this has happened? Is it a positive or negative development?
It is true that some stores or even big shopping malls went break recently because of a variety of factors. In my opinion, the vanishing of physic shopping streets is tragic and will bring negative consequences.
There are three main reasons why the high street shop is hard to survive in today’s market. Firstly, I reckon that the hit from the competing provider, the online shopping industry, impacts the overturn from the sales in stores. People, especially the young generation are accustomed to compare, select and buy things on the websites, so they are reluctant to go out for shopping. Secondly, increasing customers are interested in unique stuff made by individual owners instead of manufactory goods displaying in the high streets that you can easily spot the same thing on the road. Finally, the ridiculously high rent for the physic stores cuts the shrinking profits which worsens the owners’ financial situation.
It seems to me that the development is not a good thing for the society. Thousands of people who were working as sales in stores would lose their jobs and the unemployment rate would surge to a high point. In this case, society may face a serious social problem with a huge financial burden for supporting jobless people. On the other hand, shopping malls can also provide people with a place to hang out with friends or to relax in a café. People can buy whatever they need online but they still need high streets some time for other entertainment purposes.
In conclusion, there are different factors may cause stores going bankrupt and I think this can trigger many potential problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
..., the online shopping industry, impacts the overturn from the sales in stores. People, espec...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to comparing'.
Suggestion: accustomed to comparing
...le, especially the young generation are accustomed to compare, select and buy things on the websites,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, i reckon, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00367647059 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6096390023 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5572856686 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199434736954 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639691905885 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399293916325 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113002220015 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197595021083 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.