Accommodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Business are encouraged to move to rural advantages and disadvantages.
One of the most debatable issue today relates to that majority of individual's who live in cities and businesses are tend to move in the rural areas. Simataneously it is a favourable to the country side people's. Presenting my view I would intend to explore the aforementioned views in following paragraphs.
One side of the argument that people who argue that the benefits of factories and industries relocate in rural areas considerably out weigh it's disadvantages the main reason for believing this is that in the modern age people who live in urban areas surrounded by the nomination of vehicles and it is a harsh reality of big cities environment is never capable for human being. So people are more likely to live in the rural areas. Moreover, the most evident would be that individuals who live in villager are go to the cities for work. When the factories move in rural areas it is positive features because industries provide the number of job to villagers. For instance, the recent survey findings and clear that 80 percent job are provided by the factories to the rural individuals.
On the other hand, it is possible to make the opposing case. It is often argue that rural areas is polluted by the hot flue gases of the industries. Other stumbling block might be that transport system like truck are fully pivot on the factories they are used to transmit the load and final product of companies.obviously it is most convenient for individual to transmit the carrier load. Respectively, urban individuals deprived by their jobs and they tend to travel the long path in the purpose of jobs.
To conclusion, although there are good reason for housing and transport problem increasing. But in opinion strict rules should be make by government to use the solar power in factories and rules must be followed by the individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...s who live in cities and businesses are tend to move in the rural areas. Simataneous...
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Line 2, column 325, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...hicles and it is a harsh reality of big cities environment is never capable for human ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 509, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...at individuals who live in villager are go to the cities for work. When the factor...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'pivoted'.
Suggestion: pivoted
...t transport system like truck are fully pivot on the factories they are used to trans...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to transmitting'.
Suggestion: used to transmitting
...e fully pivot on the factories they are used to transmit the load and final product of companies...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'made'?
Suggestion: made
.... But in opinion strict rules should be make by government to use the solar power in...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82450331126 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76177401832 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519867549669 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.8887680553 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994544053125 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360166962162 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039735473689 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593954081119 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137954135423 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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