The advantages and disadvantages of the internet

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The advantages and disadvantages of the internet

Thanks to the development of technology, the Internet has played a vital part in modern lives. In my opinion, the Internet has both negative and positive effects.

First of all, the Internet brings people together. Everyone can keep in touch with family or friends immediately whenever they want. Moreover, making friends with foreigners will become easier than before partly because of the Internet. Second, the Internet is the fastest way to get the latest news. Wherever people are, they can get the breaking news right away. Indeed, it is convenient since people do not need to go out to buy newspapers or wait until the broadcast news is displayed on the TV. Besides, the Internet is a great source of knowledge for everyone. Students can access the Internet to self-study and widen their knowledge easily thanks to many useful specific academic sources.

However, it seems the Internet also has many drawbacks. First, it is surely a waste of time when using the Internet. People can be distracted from work or study, and it may affect their outcomes. Furthermore, everyone, especially students may be addicted to the Internet. Online games on the Internet become more and more popular among the young; therefore, students can become addicted to them. Adults also spend too much time using social networks and online newspapers, and they care less about their work. Also, people may have an increased risk of health problems and resulting in symptoms of anxiety or depression. Finally, although the Internet helps people get the latest news, fake news on uncensored websites on the Internet also leads to negative effects on society.

In conclusion, the Internet is greatly an advanced technology to human beings, yet people should limit time and consider using it appropriately.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...many useful specific academic sources. However, it seems the Internet also has ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16494845361 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60948994486 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9910825525 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1052631579 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204293419727 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773933418631 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055803715205 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134982964378 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314925422055 0.056905535591 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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