Advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones.
Nowadays, cell phones are increasingly popular by attracting a large number of users in the world. It is more beneficial to use cell phones due to their helpfulness. However, they also caused some drawbacks. This essay discusses both the positive and negative sides of using cell phones.
First and foremost, it is undeniable that cell phones are one of the quickest means of communicating with friends, family, coworkers. Moreover, unlike previous tools, they can be on hand for the caller at all times. Besides, entertainment is an essential reason that assists them in becoming a first-rate choice. Thanks to improvements in technology, more photos are taken on mobile phones than traditional devices nowadays. There also have a multitude of games to play or get involved with social media to pass time. Last but not least, mobile phones are the forefront types of equipment for studying. They not only are used for calculating, noting but also searching for information or looking up the dictionary easily.
It is also believed that some drawbacks that cell phones lead to caused a danger to users. In the first place, the price of a cell phone is expensive for people that have a poor background. Also, users are compulsory to buy mobile cards if they want to use cell phones. Also, the core disadvantage of using cell phones is that users do not focus on work or study. For instance, a wide range of students often texts together during their lessons. Finally, people are overly dependent on mobile phones. Whether they work or not, cell phones are always at the side of them almost 24/7.
To sum up, using mobile phones has both benefits and drawbacks. It could be said that they are an indispensable part of our life. Nevertheless, each person should be an intelligent user so that modern technology like cell phones does not chance to harm us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... are increasingly popular by attracting a large number of users in the world. It is more benefici...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91111111111 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68145934853 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3796352196 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.6666666667 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229476470296 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744461665672 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717717910637 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143488363473 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439739839754 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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