Nowadays university education is considered very important for people s future However there are a lot of successful people who didn t get higher education Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life Justify your opinion with relevant
When finishing school, students face the dilemma of whether to continue their education or not. Almost people believe that studying at university or college helps to stand a chance of landing a high paying job. Thus, I would argue that it is better to go to
college or university.
In the first place, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher, or lawyer without having a relevant degree. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications.
Also, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or working experience before will not be able to
compete.
Last but not least, learning always increases student's knowledge and widens their educational horizons as well. This helps in the molding of overall personality and to succeed in their career. Universities help them in enlightening their vision, expand their domain, polish their skills, and prepare them to face real-world challenges.
While there are some benefits to continuing to get higher education after school, I have to admit that abandoning university or getting a job after school is attractive. Many young people want to become independent and prefer their source of income rather
than relying on parents or guardians to meet their living expenses. They believe that learning skills while at work is far better than attending a college. For instance, some families of highland in Viet Nam believe that seeking higher education for their offspring
is a waste of money and time.
To sum up, it seems that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies at the university level because the skills and knowledge which students acquire at the university are unmatched.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 209, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Nam) must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
..., some families of highland in Viet Nam believe that seeking higher education for their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23839009288 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8809941828 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569659442724 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9397495454 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178403099366 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055523283851 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487762562529 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691214297582 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489869127403 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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