The advertisement of alcohol in media or public is forbidden to do it. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The alcohol is cannot be adverted in some countries. The advert of alcohol is completely illegal in most of countries all over the world. This essay agrees with this notion because this advertisement are unusual when it is seen by children and invites to immorality.
Using media is one of the common job that people do from time to time. Media is one of tools to advertise all of things what humans need in this world. Most people who use the media were dominated with children. Therefore, the advertisement of alcohol must be restricted even prohibited in front of people. Most children did not know about the channel even in television or other kinds of media. Because, their knowledge can be affected with all of advertisement even good or bad news. The publicity will evoke the children because they are innocent people. For Example, Mexico is the biggest consumers of alcohol and their government had allowed the advertising of alcohol since 2001. Then most teenagers in their country are triggered with it. Nowadays, the government of Mexico are aware to prohibit advertising of alcohol it self.
Another reason in harmful of alcohol is intoxicating for people. The accident that was held in big city caused by crime and violence of thugs. However, the thugs who do villainy are unconscious with their behavior, then one of drink which can be sizzle is alcohol. Therefore, alcohol must be completely banned with government because it will impact to the immorality. For Instance, Brazil as the country which allow the alcohol have a higher crime than other countries. Then this case proves that alcohol should invite the immorality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...ert of alcohol is completely illegal in most of countries all over the world. This essay agrees w...
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Line 2, column 826, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...ware to prohibit advertising of alcohol it self. Another reason in harmful of alcohol ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98905109489 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6504518055 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525547445255 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.2456693784 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.9473684211 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4210526316 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297550305496 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849036616246 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460224770929 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202339586096 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042048396829 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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