The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree.

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree.

The threat of atomic weapons maintains peace on the planet, however, clean and inexpensive energy could be obtained from nuclear power. Some people would argue that the benefits of this type of energy are far greater than the drawbacks.

This essay totally disagrees with this statement because although use of nuclear energy can control climate change, the threat of destroying all the living creatures if nuclear war takes place far outweighs any advantages.

The primary benefit of nuclear energy is that it can stop and reverse global warming. This is because unlike fossil fuel that produces carbon dioxide and elevates planet’s temperature, report by the Green Peace Magazine showed that replacing oil and coal by nuclear energy will control climate change within 5 years. However, it should be noted that nuclear bombs can destroying the whole planet.

Despite the benefit, the main drawback of nuclear power is that it could wipe out life on the earth. That is to say that nuclear weapons have a massive destructive power that put an immense threat to our civilization. Many countries like the USA, Japan and north Korea are trying to acquire their weapon to protect themselves and control other countries, this means that a worldwide nuclear conflict may arise at any time. For example, during the Second World War, a city in Japan was attacked by a nuclear missile and all its residents lost their lives. This means that the drawback of atomic energy far outweighs the advantages.

In conclusion, while nuclear power can stop and reverse climate change, I believe that the dangers of destructing all the planets and its habitats are by far greater than any benefits.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12274368231 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47082310806 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2401323516 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300258077056 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124030357153 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618715560083 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174736603391 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486811891916 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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